Fourth Source: talk to a professor who has taken the eLC workshop
Lede - I like what we put in at the top. The second graph - says faculty experience problems, so need to mention later (maybe with new source?)
Fact Check**
Work on transition at end, before why the change was made.
Work on drop/ add explanation...
I will e mail you more advice and suggestions tonight!
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You can just post this in the comments section of Sarah's article on the blog. Thanks!
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